托福寫作高分是很多考生夢(mèng)寐以求的,如何寫才能更有吸引力呢? 1)使用同義詞。 比如以下的一些寫作高頻詞匯的同義詞,這些詞出現(xiàn)的尤為頻繁。要學(xué)會(huì)用同義詞來(lái)替換它們。 在綜合寫作中教授說話不能總是用think,還可以用believe, consider, deem, figure out。在托福獨(dú)立寫作中表示近來(lái)的時(shí)間狀況用nowadays,還可以用recently,currently, at present, in recent years, these days 再比如表示重要的詞有important,一篇文章如果要求描寫某物重要,不能只寫important這一個(gè)詞吧,和它類似的還有 necessary, crucial, essential, vital, significant , indispensable, momentous, 如果還需要再變化,就可以用下面的改變?cè)~性的方法。 2)改變?cè)~性。 n.→ Adj. 比如:important改成be of importance n. → v. When we look at a comparison between A and B… When we compare A and B… Adj. → n. There are a variety of solutions to the problem. There are various solutions to the problem. 3)更換使用不同的承接詞。承接詞不僅連接段落和段落,還連接句子和句子。熟識(shí)一些常用的承接詞對(duì)寫作將會(huì)有極大的作用。 because of → due to, owing to, because, as, since, for but → however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas so → therefore, hence, thus, consequently 4)形容詞的逆向表達(dá)。在某些形容詞上進(jìn)行修改,會(huì)達(dá)到非比尋常的效果。 Eg: not as easy as…→more difficult than… Not uncommon→common The cheapest → the least expensive 其次,是句型的使用。在新托福寫作部分,評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中非常重要的一項(xiàng)就是句型結(jié)構(gòu),要求句型結(jié)構(gòu)做到豐富多變。例如下面的典型美句,就可以讓你的文章加分: 1)it句 It is delightful to have friends from distant lands. It is undeniable that… It is obvious that… 2)雙否句 it is by no means uncommon to find… …never fails to … 3)倒裝句 So severe is this problem that we have no alternative but to take some feasiblemeasures to deal with it. Only through education can we rise in the world. 此外,美國(guó)人的另一特點(diǎn)就是注重具體內(nèi)容。即要求我們寫的作文具體化。新托福寫作的宗旨在于communicating information。中文經(jīng)過長(zhǎng)久的發(fā)展,追求的是含蓄、抽象,用最少的話來(lái)表達(dá)深刻的思想,但美國(guó)人思維卻是具體的。如果按照中國(guó)人思維寫作,美國(guó)人會(huì)無(wú)法領(lǐng)會(huì),我們的托福作文也就只能得低分。 (責(zé)任編輯:admin) |